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Sold out items in retail email

Thursday, April 30th, 2009

firefoxscreensnapz005Here’s an interesting idea from GetElastic (an ecommerce blog worth bookmarking, btw). It started with a case study of how TigerDirect replaces product photos on their servers to indicate when something has been sold out. GetElastic’s Linda Bustos asks,

what if you deliberately included sold out product photos in your emails?’

This is a much more subtle (but no less powerful) way to add urgency than using text like, “hurry! act now! buy now!” That kind of text is typically not appreciated by spam filters. Or humans. I like the way you think, Linda.

Not convinced? I like the way you think, too. A/B test your content, then.

Do spam filters read Alt-Text?

Thursday, April 9th, 2009

firefoxscreensnapz008Someone over in the MailChimp Jungle asked, “Do spam filters read Alt-text descriptions?” I honestly had no idea, so I took my most recent MonkeyWrench email newsletter, replicated it, and I typed in the most awful, disgusting alt-text descriptions that I could think of.

Seriously, I had to wash my fingers after typing such nasty stuff, and I couldn’t look at myself in the mirror for a day or two.

In addition to the yuckiness, I typed in a bunch of stuff about gambling, and some phishing type content. And I made sure to use all caps, with lots of exclamation points (see why spam filters hate that).

Then I ran it through our Inbox Inspector’s Spam Checker tool…

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A/B testing 2 subject lines

Monday, April 6th, 2009
Click to see the winner

Click to see the winner

When I created this email newsletter, I had two different subject line ideas:

A) MonkeyWrench – Autoresponders, Turks, Freshbooks, and Webhooks

B) Turks, Freshbooks, autoresponders, and webhooks

Quick – Can you  guess which subject line got more opens? Turns out it got more clicks and fewer bounces, too!

Luckily, there’s no need to guess with MailChimp’s patent-pending built-in A/B testing tool. It’s totally automatic. I’ll show you how it works…

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Change up those subject lines

Friday, March 20th, 2009

After enduring a few million emails in my inbox from Papa John’s Pizza with subject lines like this:

papajohns-boring-subject-lines

it was SO refreshing to start receiving subject lines like this…

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Tips For C-Level Email Invitations

Wednesday, February 18th, 2009

Ever had to write an email event invitation directed at C-Level executives? Did it tank? Karen Gedney offers some extremely useful advice on how to craft upscale email invitations (that I suspect you could use for *any* emails) to C-Level fat cats.

She offers nice tips on:

  • What kind of from-name to use
  • How to craft a subject line with a little urgency
  • Designing RSVP buttons (big, red, beveled buttons don’t work)
  • Logistics info you need to include

Great advice there. Hat tip to Tamara Gielen for the link.

When you’re crafting and testing email invitations, it helps to do some A/B testing (try different from-names, subject lines, and email designs). MailChimp makes A/B testing easy, with our patent-pending automatic A/B tester.

Quick Tip #94: End With Love

Tuesday, February 3rd, 2009

How do you end your newsletters? Sincerely, Warm wishes, Regards, Kind regards?

What happened to love? Or is love too much? Lookie how Octane Coffee says “love” without saying “love:”

Email Newsletter Content Idea #124

Friday, January 30th, 2009

Gratuitous Kitty Photo!

Spotted in the right column of Batchbook CRM’s January email newsletter.

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